Sunday, 29 July 2012

The Ventilator

I stood silently, by my bed
As God held my hand and caressed my head
I fought the fight, for so long
Till the end, i remained so strong

My last wishes, were very strong
No life support and she was gone
I told God, You thought it through
I was ready for something brand new

With a heavy heart, I agreed
The time had come, my wishes would heed
My life, would not be sustained
By the ventilator, she was disdained

As i said, my goodbye
The room filled with laughter as tears filled my eyes
I smiled big, while there she stood
I told her, Our love was good

With those last words, in the air
I drifted off to sleep, no longer aware
In my heart, there was pain
That forevermore will remain .


29 comments:

  1. beautifully written pallav...

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  2. good one dear.. keep working
    i know there are many more to come.. :)

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  3. Good one dear....it was really very bhavnatmak

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  4. damn man... it really awesome

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  5. you are really an artist... all d best

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  6. hello.... u brought tears into my eyes... i am a father of 2 children and divorced... just wanted to say "A pretty girl is nothing, if she has an ugly heart"... But your poem is really deep... keep writing God Bless you son...

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  7. hey Mr. it's a long time since we met, i didn't know you are a poet too... its just awesome... u rock... your words really took out some feelings...

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  8. Your lines compels people to get themselves connected. Beautifully written

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  9. well written dude didn't know you could do all this

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  10. yaar tune dil ke taar chhoo hi liye
    pagle rula hi diya

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  11. you have got magic

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  12. its beautifully written man...
    i like poems that you can easily picture....yours is one of them....

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  13. Geez Pallav.. You have made some real good point there.. Loved it.. :)

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  14. very very impressive

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  15. gud one dude....

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  16. you have touched many hearts. in life that is called real connection. you're the best

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  17. very touching, it will always remain. u generate feelings. who the heck are you? angel man

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  18. magnifico, esplendido, maravilloso, increible
    que tocó mi corazón
    usted es un hombre que Dios envió

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  19. peace and nothing else. thanks.

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  20. You are a poet par excellence.Your style is simply but strikes the audience with precision.It sure struck me and i am still feeling it

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  21. something happened to me like this 20 yrs back and i was not able to tell anyone. Thank you for conveying my part thru a few words. I hope this reaches her because she regretted her whole life
    A grand salute to you from the Indian Army

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  22. just no words to define the beauty of this poem

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  23. you are a just like a super magnet
    you connect with all and pull there feelings out

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  24. u are superb really outstanding no word to xpess

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  25. u r rockstar,very touching lines xcllente

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