I stood silently, by my bed
As God held my hand and caressed my head
I fought the fight, for so long
Till the end, i remained so strong
My last wishes, were very strong
No life support and she was gone
I told God, You thought it through
I was ready for something brand new
With a heavy heart, I agreed
The time had come, my wishes would heed
My life, would not be sustained
By the ventilator, she was disdained
As i said, my goodbye
The room filled with laughter as tears filled my eyes
I smiled big, while there she stood
I told her, Our love was good
With those last words, in the air
I drifted off to sleep, no longer aware
In my heart, there was pain
That forevermore will remain .
As God held my hand and caressed my head
I fought the fight, for so long
Till the end, i remained so strong
My last wishes, were very strong
No life support and she was gone
I told God, You thought it through
I was ready for something brand new
With a heavy heart, I agreed
The time had come, my wishes would heed
My life, would not be sustained
By the ventilator, she was disdained
As i said, my goodbye
The room filled with laughter as tears filled my eyes
I smiled big, while there she stood
I told her, Our love was good
With those last words, in the air
I drifted off to sleep, no longer aware
In my heart, there was pain
That forevermore will remain .
beautifully written pallav...
ReplyDeletegood one dear.. keep working
ReplyDeletei know there are many more to come.. :)
Good one dear....it was really very bhavnatmak
ReplyDeletedamn man... it really awesome
ReplyDeleteyou are really an artist... all d best
ReplyDeletehello.... u brought tears into my eyes... i am a father of 2 children and divorced... just wanted to say "A pretty girl is nothing, if she has an ugly heart"... But your poem is really deep... keep writing God Bless you son...
ReplyDeletekya bat kya bat kya bat
ReplyDeletehey Mr. it's a long time since we met, i didn't know you are a poet too... its just awesome... u rock... your words really took out some feelings...
ReplyDeleteYour lines compels people to get themselves connected. Beautifully written
ReplyDeletewell written dude didn't know you could do all this
ReplyDeleteyaar tune dil ke taar chhoo hi liye
ReplyDeletepagle rula hi diya
awesome
ReplyDeleteyou have got magic
ReplyDeleteits beautifully written man...
ReplyDeletei like poems that you can easily picture....yours is one of them....
Geez Pallav.. You have made some real good point there.. Loved it.. :)
ReplyDeletemind-boggling
ReplyDeletevery very impressive
ReplyDeletegud one dude....
ReplyDeleteyou have touched many hearts. in life that is called real connection. you're the best
ReplyDeletevery touching, it will always remain. u generate feelings. who the heck are you? angel man
ReplyDeletemagnifico, esplendido, maravilloso, increible
ReplyDeleteque tocó mi corazón
usted es un hombre que Dios envió
peace and nothing else. thanks.
ReplyDeleteYou are a poet par excellence.Your style is simply but strikes the audience with precision.It sure struck me and i am still feeling it
ReplyDeletesomething happened to me like this 20 yrs back and i was not able to tell anyone. Thank you for conveying my part thru a few words. I hope this reaches her because she regretted her whole life
ReplyDeleteA grand salute to you from the Indian Army
Super like sir
Deletejust no words to define the beauty of this poem
ReplyDeleteyou are a just like a super magnet
ReplyDeleteyou connect with all and pull there feelings out
u are superb really outstanding no word to xpess
ReplyDeleteu r rockstar,very touching lines xcllente
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